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Well he might have over explained problems of our democracy,he didnt deviate much since the topic need a critical analysis of our democracy ,evils of other government forms and why we should defend it with our life just as turks did !
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Right, i also mentioned the same that deviated somewhat from the topic. Rest depends on the examiner
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Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion



remember that it was test for AD MOD not CSS Exam
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Outlines for today's essay.
1) Democracy as a form of Government
1.1 Freedom
1.2 rule of law
1.3 Equality
1.4 transparency and accountability

2) How to defend democracy?
2.1 Build Institutions
2.2 Awareness among Masses
2.3 Education and literacy rate
2.4 Role of Media
2.5 Role of int. Organizations

3) Democracy is best form of Government
3.1) Developed countries are democratic
3.2) south east asian countries switched to democracy and they made progress
3.3) USSR communist union disintegrated
3.4) Arab Spring Was a desire for freedom ( democracy)

4) Comparison of Democracy and other forms of government
4.1 demo vs dictatorship
4.2 demo vs monarchy
4.3 demo vs theocracy
4.4 demo vs plutocracy

5) Conclusion

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Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion
i think essay was not about democracy in pakistan. It was about democracy.
I might be wrong if it is not so.
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Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion.
The essay of democracy was a bit more theoretical by explaining about the democracy and by giving an supporting argument to support the statement of the essay. Moreover, the explanation of the application of democracy was also required but in small doses. In the end, as you have put your outline to be judged here, I pray you should succeed in this step of the examination.
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Outlines for today's essay.
1) Democracy as a form of Government
1.1 Freedom
1.2 rule of law
1.3 Equality
1.4 transparency and accountability

2) How to defend democracy?
2.1 Build Institutions
2.2 Awareness among Masses
2.3 Education and literacy rate
2.4 Role of Media
2.5 Role of int. Organizations

3) Democracy is best form of Government
3.1) Developed countries are democratic
3.2) south east asian countries switched to democracy and they made progress
3.3) USSR communist union disintegrated
3.4) Arab Spring Was a desire for freedom ( democracy)

4) Comparison of Democracy and other forms of government
4.1 demo vs dictatorship
4.2 demo vs monarchy
4.3 demo vs theocracy
4.4 demo vs plutocracy

5) Conclusion

Ambber need your comments.
your outline seems legit.
best according to the topic.
hope for the best
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Outlines for today's essay.
1) Democracy as a form of Government
1.1 Freedom
1.2 rule of law
1.3 Equality
1.4 transparency and accountability

2) How to defend democracy?
2.1 Build Institutions
2.2 Awareness among Masses
2.3 Education and literacy rate
2.4 Role of Media
2.5 Role of int. Organizations

3) Democracy is best form of Government
3.1) Developed countries are democratic
3.2) south east asian countries switched to democracy and they made progress
3.3) USSR communist union disintegrated
3.4) Arab Spring Was a desire for freedom ( democracy)

4) Comparison of Democracy and other forms of government
4.1 demo vs dictatorship
4.2 demo vs monarchy
4.3 demo vs theocracy
4.4 demo vs plutocracy

5) Conclusion

Ambber need your comments.
Your outline seems good but not in a pattern. According to me, your heading number 4 should be placed after point 1, then point number 3, and point 2 of defending democracy should come just before conclusion. Because once you justified merits of democracy, its importance as best form of government , then in last you should place ways to defend and strengthen democracy.
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i think essay was not about democracy in pakistan. It was about democracy.
I might be wrong if it is not so.
yes it is right, i think i deviate to pakistan's democracy. but it is necessary to put about democracy in pakistan
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Outlines for today's essay.
1) Democracy as a form of Government
1.1 Freedom
1.2 rule of law
1.3 Equality
1.4 transparency and accountability

2) How to defend democracy?
2.1 Build Institutions
2.2 Awareness among Masses
2.3 Education and literacy rate
2.4 Role of Media
2.5 Role of int. Organizations

3) Democracy is best form of Government
3.1) Developed countries are democratic
3.2) south east asian countries switched to democracy and they made progress
3.3) USSR communist union disintegrated
3.4) Arab Spring Was a desire for freedom ( democracy)

4) Comparison of Democracy and other forms of government
4.1 demo vs dictatorship
4.2 demo vs monarchy
4.3 demo vs theocracy
4.4 demo vs plutocracy

5) Conclusion

Ambber need your comments.
We made blunders, in AD test outline was not required. In Assistant/SI test, while attempting precis, we were not asked to write its title. I am afraid of such blunder. Other than that, everything is fine. I have read your outlines, they are superb.
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