AD MoD essay paper 2017
 

Please share essays as exact that you recall & share your outlines, so that we may assess our essays.

Best of Luck.

Technological conveniences were to save time, ironically man has much less l time now
 

Theme sentence: The time saved with the help of machines is also spent on the machines"
1.Intoduction
2.WHAT WAS THE PURPOSE
- break barriers
-facilitate labor
-easy acces
-rapid connectivity
3.WHAT IS ACHIEVED
- laziness
-dependency
-lack of intelligence
-lack of social skills
-dying relationships
-estranged parents
4.IRONY EXPLAINED
-selfies on dining table
-lack of communication
-rise in suicide
-populated cyber cafe's
-lifelesness
-status updates against quality time
5.WHAT TO DO
-Priorities be set.
-Need based use.
6.CONCLUSION

[QUOTE=Greenboat;1011016]Please share essays as exact that you recall & share your outlines, so that we may assess our essays.

Best of Luck.[/QUOTE]
Greeny, you there?

[QUOTE=sadafazam;1011023]Theme sentence: The time saved with the help of machines is also spent on the machines"
1.Intoduction
2.WHAT WAS THE PURPOSE
- break barriers
-facilitate labor
-easy acces
-rapid connectivity
3.WHAT IS ACHIEVED
- laziness
-dependency
-lack of intelligence
-lack of social skills
-dying relationships
-estranged parents
4.IRONY EXPLAINED
-selfies on dining table
-lack of communication
-rise in suicide
-populated cyber cafe's
-lifelesness
-status updates against quality time
5.WHAT TO DO
-Priorities be set.
-Need based use.
6.CONCLUSION[/QUOTE]

I chose the exact same topic.. But your outline looks way more stronger than mine. Well done!

Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion

[QUOTE=zarjankhan;1011268]Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion[/QUOTE]
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I attempted this essay:

"Originality is not the one which no one has said so far, but originality is the thinking from yourself".

[QUOTE=zarjankhan;1011268]Essay on DEMOCRACY

1 Introduction
2 What is democracy
3 Components of democracy
4 World and Democracy
5 Democracy in Pakistan
i). Lack of Political Leadership
ii). Lack of Political Awareness
iii). Weak Political Institutions
iv). Delay in Constitution Framing
v). Poor Administration
vi). Post Establishment Problems of PAkistan
6 Military Interventions
i). Ayub Regime
ii). Yahya Regime
iii). Zai ul Haq Regime
iv). Musharaf Regime
7 Fruits of Democracy
i). Rule of Law
ii). Equality
iii). Freedom of Speech
iv). Rights of Everyone
v). Independent Judiciary
vi). Accountability and Transparency
8 Fruits of Democracy in Pakistan
i). Z.A. Bhutto: 1972 to 1977
ii). PPP and PMLN Govts: 1988 to 1999
iii). Back of Democracy in 2008
9 Conclusion[/QUOTE]
The essay was regarding democracy as best form of government, how?.. How it protect the right to freedom and the role of individual in protecting right to freedom. You deviated i guess from the right topic by discussing problems of democracy in pakistan and the military regimes.

[QUOTE=Ambber;1011296]The essay was regarding democracy as best form of government, how?.. How it protect the right to freedom and the role of individual in protecting right to freedom. You deviated i guess from the right topic by discussing problems of democracy in pakistan and the military regimes.[/QUOTE]
As we know, most of the time in pakistan, military remained in power.
only 25 years out of 70, democracy is practiced.
so i defended the topic by condemning all the military intervention and lags in process of democracy.

[QUOTE=zarjankhan;1011305]As we know, most of the time in pakistan, military remained in power.
only 25 years out of 70, democracy is practiced.
so i defended the topic by condemning all the military intervention and lags in process of democracy.[/QUOTE]

Well, you were writing essay to join the most powerful institution of Pakistani military. Hopefully you did not cursed military more than required.:))