PMS 2017 English Essay
 

Today's Essay Paper:

1. Soft words and hard arguments.

2. A person who won't read has no advantage over a person who can't read.

3. Brevity is the soul of wit.

4. Can Globalization and Nationalism co-exist in the long run.?

5. The relevance of Organization of Islamic Cooperation (OIC) in the global political scenario and its role in promoting and protecting interests of the Muslim word.

6. Economic growth without distributive justice breeds violence.


I attempted No. 5 here is my outline:

[B]1.[/B] [B]Introduction to OIC[/B]
[B]2.[/B] [B]Roles of OIC [/B]
a. Political role
b. Socio-economic role
c. Strategic role
d. Protecting religious and human rights of muslims
[B]3.[/B] [B]Challenges and issues faced by Muslims[/B]
a. Palestine Issue
b. Yemen Issue
c. War in Syria
d. Kashmir Issue
e. War against extremism and terror
[B]4.[/B] [B]Future Perspectives of OIC for resolving Issues[/B]
a. Joint Security Policy
b. Joint Socio-economic Framework
c. Promoting Islamic Ideology
d. Promoting education in poor countries
[B]5.[/B] [B]Conclusion[/B]


Senior/Members please evaluate my outline. Thanks!

Wish you best of luck. The headings you made must have been to the point. I'd have rather attempted this essay as the following;

.Brief introduction of the OIC. Why was the OIC created? What were the objectives?
. The relevance of the OIC in today's global political scenario
. How could it play its role in promoting and protecting interests of the Muslim word?
. What has been the role of the OIC in promoting and protecting interests of the Muslim word?
. What are the challenges faced by the org?
. How can it be the role mode for all the Muslims around the world?
. Conclusion

A. Oic role in changing political scenario
a. Alliances in todays world and oic
B. Terrorism and war against terrorism.
C. Cases of kashmir palestine afghanistan syria and iraq.
D. Islamophobia and oic.
E. Rise of IS and Oic role

B. Role in protecting interests.
A. Sovereignty of muslim satates and oic.
B. Economic intersts.
C. Peace and security and oic.
D. Human rights and oic.
E. Promoting unity and combating sectarian divide.
Recommendations.
Comclusion

Please evaluate my outline

1-Introduction
2- History
3- How OIC is relevant:
a) Disunity among Muslim States
b) current plight of muslims around the globe
c) Creation of an economic bloc
d) Geo strategic importance of Muslim World
[COLOR="darkred"]aa) Gawadar, Chabhar and Hormuz Strait[/COLOR]
4-Brand Islam
a) Branding and Positioning of Islam
5-Way Forward:
a) Islamic News Agency
b) An agency on the pattern of UNESCO
c) International Islamic Court
d)Muslim Army
[COLOR="DarkRed"] a) to fight terrorism in Muslim States.
b) to come out of American influence.[/COLOR]
6-Conclusion:
a blunder i made is that i have written wrong spelling of CONCLUSION,examiner was calling bs krdo bhai bs krdo, and the i couldn't mention the colored parts in the outline though i have written in the body.

6th topics is good one. Though all topics are good.

5. The relevance of Organization of Islamic Cooperation (OIC) in the global political scenario and its role in promoting and protecting interests of the Muslim word.

Outline:

A. What is OIC?
i. Historical perspective
ii. Goals and objectives
iii. Current status
B. How is OIC's role relevant in the current global political scenario?
i. Organization of the Muslim world
ii. Middle eastern crisis
C. How can OIC protect the interests of the Muslim world?
i. Political interests
ii. Economic interests
D. How can its role be made more effective?
i. Mutual cooperation
ii. Establishment of a Singular economic system
iii. Strong Defense
E. Conclusion

I attempted #4: Can Globalization and Nationalism co-exist in the long run?

[B][U]Outline[/U][/B]

1) Introduction: Recent events in the international political arena suggest that Globalization and Nationalism cannot go side by side.
2) Evidences of the clash:
a) Donald Trump's triumph
b) Brexit
c) French & German Election
d) Australian restraint on Immigrants
e) North Korea
3) Causes of the clash:
a) Economic Factors:
i) Unemployment
ii) Downfall of local industry
iii) Increasing Debts and Deficits
b) Social Elements:
i) Religious Insecurities
ii) Ethnic Demographics
iii) Immigration
iv) Inter-racial Marriages
c) Political Factors:
i) 9/11 and War on Terror
ii) Refugees Crisis
iii) Expenditure on Military Alliances
iv) Representation issue
4) Way-outs
5) Conclusion

I attempted No.6.
Insha Allah will share my outline in few days.

Interesting

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Economic growth without distributive justice breeds violence.
 

1.Introduction
Thesis statement:- Economic growth with distributive injustice is short-term, and not only breeds violence but also shunts the socio-political growth of a nation.
2. Why Economic growth without distributive injustice is short-term and breeds violence
2.1) Isolation of masses from the affairs of the state.
2.2)Division of classes within a state.
2.3)Liberation from the malign administration.
2.4)Strikes and rallies against the unjust.
2.4)As a state is in turmoil, attracting foreign and local investment is an uphill task.
3.Socio- political impact of economic growth with distributive injustice.
3.1)At state level
3.2)At individual level
4. Examples
4.1)British Empire
4.2)French Revolution
4.3)German revolution
4.4)India model
5. Conclusion
:dd