Wrote on the 3rd one. essay revolved around american civil war, Irish struggle, Slave struggles, Gandhi's nonviolence and some quotes. Took support from the speech ''Give me liberty or give me death''. Also mentioned how some people nowadays use the cover of liberty to create chaos in society for political gains. God knows what happens now. Tried my level best. But writing 1500 words in 2 hours expose you to some mistakes and blunders.

anyone who wrote it is not the year in your life that count. its the life

[SIZE="7"][SIZE="5"]"It is no the years in your life that count. It is the life in your years"

Introduction:
- Sometimes a single moment in life is enough to establish and deconstruct the whole purpose of life. Whereas, sometimes an entire life seems to be futile and fruitless. Hence dividing life into several patches of years and time makes the constitution of life haphazard and topsy-turvy.

- Different facets of life

-Thesis Statement

Present Day Discords/Contradictions:

a) Unbridled materialistic pursuits till the years of retirement have made the life uni-directional.

b) Misconception of relation between success and the number of years one lives.

c) Pre-defined social roles and responsibilities according to pre-established time framework.

d) Life as mean to ends not as end to achieve various means.

Exploring the forceful gravity of Life over time/years:

On Individual Level:

a) Life for life sake aids in the deconstruction of rigid ideological positions we have formed in our early years about life.

b) Living every single moment helps to achieve spiritual connection by disconnecting oneself from external environment.

c) Expansion of human sympathies free from time-driven materialistic life.

d) Sense of free creature/soul.

e) Living life as unified whole shuns the fear of death.

f) Refined outlook on life and nature.

On Global Level:

a) Every moment, day, month and year can be Women Day, Labor day. Life should decide the day, day shouldn't define the life.

b) Global system promoting actual purposes of life (welfare projects) which should be continual irrespective of time and incumbent government.

Examples Justifying the Statement:

a) John Keats, despite getting a life of few years, had altered the dynamics of poetry. Hence, age or number of years cannot define one's potential and limits.

b) John Milton's example

c) Few others.

Conclusion:
-Let your mind wander, it would create wonder.

Its was my 1st exposure with zero practice. I wrote these outline and satrted essay introduction and body. Unfortunately I failed in managing time and did not completed my esaay :-(

Environment pollution is an incurable disease. It can only be prevented. Discuss in the context of global initiatives on environment.
OUTLINE:
INTRODUCTION:-
- What is Environmental pollution?
- Relation between pollution and progress/development
- Combat pollutants vs benefits
- Irrevesible outcomes
- Prevention is only treatment
HISTORY:
- 1st Man and pollution
- Before 19th century
- After 19th century
- Modern Global Initiatives
> Earth Summit 1992
> Kyoto Protocol 1997
> Copenhagen Deal 2001
> Paris Agreement 2016
CAUSES WHICH CAN BE PREVENTED
- General Causes
> Industrialisation (How cause pollution and how can be limited)
> Urbanisation
> Use of oil and fuel
> Deforestation
- Specific Causes
> Carbon monoxide
> Cardon dioxide
> Chlorofluorocarbons
> Hydrofluorocarbons
> Sulphur
> Agrochemicals
> Oil spills
EFFECTS WHICH ARE IRREVERSIBLE
- Global Warming ( how happened and how irreversible)
- Melting of Ice poles
- Climate Change
- Extinction of species such as polar bear
- Destruction of plants and forests
PREVENTIVE MEASURES
- Legal framework
- Use of Alternative Energy resources
- Industrial Estates
- Control urbanisation
- Mass awareness
- Research
CONCLUSION

It is no the years in your life that count. It is the life in your years

outline:
1.Life (introduction)
2.History
3.Happiness
4.Sadness
5.Relationship b/w happiness and life
6.relationship b/w sadness and life
7.factors affecting happy life
8.relationship of time and life
9.My perception about life
10.conclusion

1500/6=250..........total essay lines
250/10=25.......lines per paragraph...
still last paragraph reh gya,...due to shortage of time

What are passing marks English Essay 2016. Is it 33 or increased to 40? Please confirm.

40

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Again hitting bulls eye this year. Best of luck.

No.5 dilemma of water and energy crisis in Pakistan. The way forward.

1. Introduction
2. Water crisis
a. Assessment of water crisis in Pakistan
b. Threat from India
c. Threat from Afghanistan
d. Effects of climate change
e. Water pollution
f. Water salination and degradation
3. Interdependence of water and Energy
4. Energy crisis
a. Assessment of energy crisis
b. Root cause analysis of energy crisis
- technical causes
- administrative causes
c. Dependency on water
5. Impact of water and energy crisis
a. On agriculture
b. On industry
c. On economy
d. On society
e. On government
6. The way forward
a. Dispute resolution with India
b. Promotion of dialogue and diplomacy
c. Water conservation and management of available resources
d. Eliminating the bottle necks from energy sector
e. Resolution of technical and administrative problems
f. Incorporation of renewable energy
7. Conclusion

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having no experience is just a myth while it is really a good effort and hope it will fetch handsome score
Do concentrate on next papers and strike with full might.

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