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its possible Sunday, December 27, 2015 09:40 PM

[QUOTE=Talha Majeed;897935]I attempted topic number 6. "Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situations.[/QUOTE]

can you please share your outline here? actually, im curious to know that how you approached. literature is nowadays very important topic for essay in pms and css, Alas! i didnt learn to write an essay on it.

prince93 Sunday, December 27, 2015 10:00 PM

Brother sorry to say but your stuff is totaly irrelevant, focus on keywords,
Education is not preparation of life, but life itself

Mean your focus would have been importance of subjects like social sciences, psychology, literature etc through which man knows about itself its life, your arguments should have been on this theme.... seniors can comment well....

najambaloch Sunday, December 27, 2015 10:24 PM

Urdu is our national language, and its use is vital for our progress.

Outline:

A). What's national language?
B). Basic features of Urdu language?
C). How is it vital for our progress?
i. National solidarity and unity
ii. Scientific research and development
iii. Effective communication
iv. Cultural promotion
v. Positive image of the Pakistani nation
D). Steps that need to be taken to enhance its use.
i. Incentives
ii. National policy
iii. Media
E). Conclusion

Ammar9 Sunday, December 27, 2015 10:37 PM

outline
 
.DEVELOPMENT IS ABOUT TRANSFORMING THE LIVES OF PEOPLE, NOT JUST TRANSFORMING ECONOMIES.
1 - Introduction.
2-What is Development?
3-Some indicators of development..
4- Is it so that development is actually about transforming the lives of people? ?
Yes, it is.By improving the lives of people many positive changes emerge which certainly helps in achieving sustainable development.
a)Political stability
b)Decrease in poverty
c)Decrease in unemployment.
d)less crimes
e)Better nutrition and sanitation facilities.
f)National integration
g)Decrease in militancy and terrorism

5- Repercussions on focusing only on economic development.
6 - economic development is itself dependant on human development.
7- Recommendations for improving the lives of people in order to achieve sustainable development.
8 Conclusion.

I did not write detailed outline as it was 2 hours paper and it was instructed to write a brief outline.

CivilHuman Sunday, December 27, 2015 10:45 PM

[QUOTE=najambaloch;897964]Urdu is our national language, and its use is vital for our progress.

Outline:

A). What's national language?
B). Basic features of Urdu language?
C). How is it vital for our progress?
i. National solidarity and unity
ii. Intellectuals and Urdu
iii. Effective communication
iv. Cultural promotion
v. Positive image of the Pakistani nation
D). Steps that need to be taken to enhance its use.
i. Incentives
ii. National policy
iii. Media
E). Conclusion[/QUOTE]


This is a good outline.. My outline was as follows:

A)introduction
B) Reasons: Why Urdu is necessary
1) Urdu in historical context
2) Scientific developments and Urdu
3) utilization of Human resources if they are taught urdu

C) Impacts
1) Economy progress
2) Use of native language to Dominate the world

D) Solutions
1) to transfer all curriculum into urdu
2) Govt should be proactive
3) Role of Civil Society

E) Conclusion


PS: My English Teacher said,'' you should not have choose this topic as this is the controversial. Some people are not favour of it..'' :))

najambaloch Sunday, December 27, 2015 11:10 PM

[QUOTE=CivilHuman;897978]This is a good outline.. My outline was as follows:

A)introduction
B) Reasons: Why Urdu is necessary
1) Urdu in historical context
2) Scientific developments and Urdu
3) utilization of Human resources if they are taught urdu

C) Impacts
1) Economy progress
2) Use of native language to Dominate the world

D) Solutions
1) to transfer all curriculum into urdu
2) Govt should be proactive
3) Role of Civil Society

E) Conclusion


PS: My English Teacher said,'' you should not have choose this topic as this is the controversial. Some people are not favour of it..'' :))[/QUOTE]

It's relevant to the topic. And I don't think that many have a problem with Urdu being our national language. It's just that some folks don't like the idea of discarding the English language altogether.

safeer khan Sunday, December 27, 2015 11:18 PM

[QUOTE=najambaloch;897964]Urdu is our national language, and its use is vital for our progress.

Outline:

A). What's national language?
B). Basic features of Urdu language?
C). How is it vital for our progress?
i. National solidarity and unity
ii. Scientific research and development
iii. Effective communication
iv. Cultural promotion
v. Positive image of the Pakistani nation
D). Steps that need to be taken to enhance its use.
i. Incentives
ii. National policy
iii. Media
E). Conclusion[/QUOTE]
Congratulations.
Among all other outlines, yours is the strongest.

Had you incorporated two or more qoutes in your essay, I'm sure of your success.

Best of luck for coming papers.

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musmanhussain Monday, December 28, 2015 07:23 AM

@najambaloch
@srk345
Both of you have good outline.Hopefully you people will make it.
Mostly people who wrote on education mostly deviate from the topic.PMS essay requires only to the point and brief outline..

My Outline:

The development which is other than economic development and the which improve the lives of people is called human development.I think examiner ask in the essay human development.
How human development can transform the lives?
Through educate the masses
Through employment opportunities
Through equality(equal distribution of wealth and resources)
Through political stability
Through Social justice
Through remove income inequality
Through women development
Through health facilities
The pragmatic solution of human development is good governance
Recent encouraging steps at national and international levels to flourish human development.
Sustainable development goals
Millienium develpoment goals
Micro credit loans
Higher education scholarship etc.

YSGUJJAR Monday, December 28, 2015 08:28 AM

Education is not preparation for life; education is life itself.
Outline
1) introduction
Education makes a man socially and vulturally vibrant and economically independent.
2) Education leads toward tolerance and peaceful co- existance.
3) It leads toward industrialization.
4) It leads towad real democracy.
5) It makes a way to use human as well as natural resources of a country.
6) It leads toward social justice, equality and fairplay.
7) It leads toward iterfaith harmony.
8) So the neads is to focus on education rather heavily spending on crushing human being on the name of terrorism.
9) All these things show that education is life itself.
10) Conclusion.
Attemted this essay.Please comment

timeOn Monday, December 28, 2015 09:54 AM

Education is not for preparation of life, education is life in itself.

A. Introduction to education
a) in the light of Islamic teachings
b) in the light of teachings of Quaid e Azam

B) Importance of education in life
a) political life
b) economic life
c) social life

C) Status of education in pakistan
i) problems of education
1. Lack of political will
2. Bureacratic ineptitude
3. Shortage of funds

ii) Efforts to improve education
1. Insertion of Article 25-A in the constitution
2. Devolution of education to the provinces
3. Special focus on primary education

D) How education is life in itself
1. It builds character of citizen
2. It teaches how to live balanced life
3. It creates social awareness
4. Acts as an agent of economic progress

E) Analyses

F) Conclusion

( Essay included 2 histographs, 1 pie chart, 2 Ayaat of Holy Quran, 1 Hadith of Holy Prophet, two quotations of scholors) total 17 pages..more than 1500 words.


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