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CCE-2013 qualifiers, first of all congratulation and best wishes ahead. Please evaluate my essay, what went wrong! I have been flunked in essay, secured only 15 marks! I want to learn from mistakes so that I may not repeat them in upcoming attempt (CCE-2018, qualified screening again).

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Your essay seems similar to mine i opted this topic and wrote these points.
Shukar Allah i qualified with 20 marks
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CCE-2013 qualifiers, first of all congratulation and best wishes ahead. Please evaluate my essay, what went wrong! I have been flunked in essay, secured only 15 marks! I want to learn from mistakes so that I may not repeat them in upcoming attempt (CCE-2018, qualified screening again).

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It feels sorry to hear that you did not pass this paper. If you don't mind, I will put forward some flaws and mistakes.

1. Although your introduction was good, it was not very powerful or convincing. You should have made it general.

2. In heading (b) you can write that CPEC is landmark project of OBOR, which is likely to compete with other large trade partnerships.

3. Heading (c) is good but it can be better to write CPEC will stabilize underdeveloped areas of the country and region by bringing economic prosperity in those areas.

4. In heading e and f, you targeted specific countries. Instead, you could have written that CPEC has the ability to upset current regional setup and redraw a new one. For example, CPEC can change energy politics and security setup in the region. Something like this.

5. Other points are good. But you could have made it more organised by dividing it into three sub-headings: the game changer for Pakistan, region and world.

I hope you will not mind as a junior student is evaluating your essay.
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Do you believe CPEC is a game changer? Justify

1.Introduction

2. CPEC-Current status

-$46 billion project has reached $62 billion (2017)
-It contains highways, roadways, railways, gas pipelines & infrastructure projects

3. CPEC is a game changer project because
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a) It will boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan
b)It will curtail TPP (Trans Pacific Partnership)
c)It will stabilize Balouchistan and Afghanistan
d)It will mitigate the demand and gape supply in energy crisis
e) It will curtail US dominancy in east
f) It will curtail Indian chabar port
g)It will produce financial & cultural integration
It will facilitate China to have short distance for approaching oil abundant states
h)It will generate millions of jobs for Pakistanis as well as for Chinese
i)It will change the destiny of Sino-Pakistan
j)It will change the world politics and world economy

4. Indeed, it is a game changer project

5. Conclusion



Introduction
China Pakistan Economic Corridor (CPEC) is a giant project, was initiated by China in 2013. The project was kicked off with the cost of $46 billion which has reached $62 billion at present. This project contains highways, roadways, railroads, airports and many infrastructural developments from Kasghar to Gwadar. It is a game changer project because it will not only boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan, but also will curtail the US dominancy in the east. The TPP and Chabhar port will also not be able to compete with the crown project of OBOR what is called CPEC. The financial and cultural integration will bring a new horizon in the Sino-Pakistan ties. Hence, on account of CPEC, Pakistan is supposed to be one of the developed countries in the near future. Thus, it has rightly been said that CPEC is a game changer.


Conclusion
Conclusively, even though CPEC is confronted with numerous hurdles, it does not mean it is going to be frozen. Giant projects face multifarious obstacles but together with they work towards the progress and developments. Indeed, CPEC is a game changer project that is going to be a prime cause of the integrated economy of the world. It will doom the hegemony of the US and will not let India to menace Pakistan anymore. CPEC is going to change the world politics and world economy.


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Senior members please guide me about the essay paper of CCE. Is there any specified word limit in the essay paper, like that in CSS paper. If not then what is the recommended number of words that we should cross at least while attempting the paper, keeping in mind that it is only a 2 hours paper.

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