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Akber the great was born to Humayun in Umerkot fort who actually consolidated the Mughal empire. Did you mention it?
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Akber the great was born to Humayun in Umerkot fort who actually consolidated the Mughal empire. Did you mention it?

Yes, I gave separate heading of Umarkot, as Humayun was trying to conquer Sindh along with the help of Rana of Umarkot, in the meanwhile Akbar was born.
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Raja Bahar, dear I made two mistakes in letter to editorial, please do let me know whether they will deduct my marks or not. I started my letter like this. Please have a look at this, let me see if you detect the mistake.


....................................... Address: GGHS Sukkur, Hall 5,
........................................Date: 5-12-2017
To,

The Editor of an English Daily
Newspaper XYZ

Dear Sir,

with due respet it is submitted that I want to inform you about the deteriorating condition of education through your esteeemed Daily Englsih newspaper XYZ that......................(mentioned content all the deterioatitng condition of education system in Pak, illiteracy ration in Pak as compare to Srilanka, Bangladesh & India, CSS passing ration getting worse day by day, no quality of education etc,)...

Thus, I am hoping that through your esteemed newspaper, the concerned authority would take initiations in kicking off the the measures and redressing the educational policy etc.

I am confident that that your honour will look into my genuine request in a realistic perspective, ensuring that my request is accesed to at your hinour's earliest request.

Yours Obediently
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Raja Bahar, dear I made two mistakes in letter to editorial, please do let me know whether they will deduct my marks or not. I started my letter like this. Please have a look at this, let me see if you detect the mistake.


....................................... Address: GGHS Sukkur, Hall 5,
........................................Date: 5-12-2017
To,

The Editor of an English Daily
Newspaper XYZ

Dear Sir,

with due respet it is submitted that I want to inform you about the deteriorating condition of education through your esteeemed Daily Englsih newspaper XYZ that......................(mentioned content all the deterioatitng condition of education system in Pak, illiteracy ration in Pak as compare to Srilanka, Bangladesh & India, CSS passing ration getting worse day by day, no quality of education etc,)...

Thus, I am hoping that through your esteemed newspaper, the concerned authority would take initiations in kicking off the the measures and redressing the educational policy etc.

I am confident that that your honour will look into my genuine request in a realistic perspective, ensuring that my request is acceded to at your honour's earliest convenience.

Yours Obediently
XYZ
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To me, there is no need to write your address at the top as it is not informal letter. Secondly it would be better if you had mentioned the subject. Lastly instead of obediently sincerely could be better along with date in the end.
However your effort is not so bad and you will definitely get some good marks.
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To me, there is no need to write your address at the top as it is not informal letter. Secondly it would be better if you had mentioned the subject. Lastly instead of obediently sincerely could be better along with date in the end.
However your effort is not so bad and you will definitely get some good marks.
Actually it is a rule to write address and date at top right of the letter to editorial except informal letters which we write to our kith and kin. However, The mistake that I made was "obedient". It is a mistake, I realized it while jotting it down in the paper. But I intentionally did not erase it out because my all answers were neat and clean so I did not want to mess up. In letter to editorial, giving subject is not mandatory. I have checked it out in two books.

And thank you so much for your timely reply and improvement.
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@Wonderworld
please share your score of Indo-Pak-II in previously conducted C.C.E,2013.
In my opinion there was no need for diagrams in this paper.Best of luck.
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It is all about game of arguments - that was what - I learned from the previous attempt. I drew maps and flow charts either last time but scored 60 in Indo Pak and Pub Ad.

But, if maps are flowcharts are incorporated professionally and described with solid arguments, i am cent percent sure, it will reward additional marks in bonus.

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It is all about game of arguments - that was what - I learned from the previous attempt. I drew maps and flow charts either last time but scored 60 in Indo Pak and Pub Ad.

But, if maps are flowcharts are incorporated professionally and described with solid arguments, i am cent percent sure, it will reward additional marks in bonus.

Good luck.
I agree.. relevancy matters... neither length nor tactics but answers are req. Experience....
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@Sanaa sidiqi, would you like to tell me the result of your previous attempt?
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