Thanks party-pooper for your input. I shall make the necessary changes to the essay and post it here, again.
Also, I read an essay on the above topic whose outline is as follows. Please assess whether it looks fine

1. Introduction

2. The State of Inclusive Nationalism in the World for Minorities

a. Positive Angle : Liberal and Moderate Policies for Minorities in Canada
b. Negative Angle: Marginalization of Rohingya Muslims in Myanmar and Christians ,
Hindus in Pakistan

3. Non-inclusiveness of nationalism is Controllable

a. Protection of basic human rights of minorities
b. Apply political, social and economic safeguards for minorities
c. Integrate minorities into mainstream

4. How can nationalism be inclusive to protect the rights and interests of Minorities

a. Politically – Providing opportunities for integration into main stream politics
b. Socially – Addressing social insecurities of minorities
c. Culturally – Guaranteeing basic rights for promoting religious and cultural activities

5. Conclusion

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