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Originally Posted by Zahoor Soomro View Post
Topic :- life without controversy is no life. But why one should not choose the safe heavens of conformism.



Outline :

1:- Introduction

Undoubtedly, life without controversy is fruitless. Controversy develops when a person/ nation holds different opinion than other person/ nation. If people had not left the safe heaves of conformism then the progress which we are observing today would not have happened.

2 :- People become controversial because of holding different opinions

3:- Controversy is natural in a society

4 :- Controversy and then civilized way to deal with that controversy lead to development of progressive, tolerant and an egalitarian society

5 :- Controversy and democracy go hand in hand

6 :- If people had not left the safe heavens of conformism we would not have witnessed progress

A. Socrates, Hegel and Karl Marx

B. Romantic movement of poetry in europe

C. Progressive movement of poetry and afsana in Pakistan

7 . All the revolutions in the world happened because people left the safe heavens of conformism and chose to become controversial

A. American Revolution

B. French Revolution

C. Muslim revolution in the subcontinent

8 . People choose safe heavens of conformism over being controversial because of the violent ways of dealing with controversy ---- it's causes

A. Illiteracy

B. Religious dogamtism

C. Lawlessness

D. Tribalism and feudalism

E. Ethnonationalistic tendencies

9. Impacts of this

A. Stagnation in a society

B. Populism

C. International conflicts

10. What should be done to deal with controversies in a civilized way

A. Education --- rational

B. Rule of law

Independent judiciary

Rule of might is right should be curtailed

C. Promotion of democratic values and decrease influence of tribalism and end feudalism by land reforms

D. Decrease ethnonationalistic tendencies

11. Pakistan: A case study

12. Conclusion

To conclude is to say that it is need of the hour to develop a civilized way to deal with controversy so that people can fearlessly leave the safe havens of conformism, otherwise civilization will perish.


Essay is relevant from points 4-7. Everything above and below these points is irrelevant, and will most probably be penalised. You should have stuck to proving the very last line of your thesis. You deviated. Let's hope the examiner goes soft on you, otherwise you are in the danger zone.


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