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Originally Posted by akkk
i only asked from you as your outline represent that you prove only one point.Outline is brief sketch of essay.If you take my comment positively this comment didn't represent that i criticized you.If any one on this forum then he derived same result from your oultine as me.As far as your question is concerned it depends upon circumstances.Even you refused to conform to established principle of judiaism as jews many jewish people criticized you or religious conformism also bring contrversy.So proved one point if you go on the second point then give so many examples.It become argumentative essay whether you agree or disagree and it creates problem for writer and in simple word it bring controversy for writer by examiner when he read essay.I have not enough time to criticized any one.
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Dear, first of all, I am totally unable to understand what you want to say in this message but your tone is quite offensive to me.
Secondly, where did I say that you have criticized me? I simply said I have responded this earlier and reiterated my opinion time and again. You have every right to disagree with me but absolutely no right to force your idea on me.
Thirdly, I have responded to this "response to the second statement" time and again on the previous posts in this thread.
Lastly, I posted my outline upon request of many other respected members on this forum for information purpose, not for evaluation and persistent public comments.
I never said mine is an ideal/model outline for the said Essay. There are people who were and are better than me and can write classy Essays.
Even I don't have so spare time to respond the same thing again and again and eventually replying to other's perceptions.
So instead of bashing at a mature, respected and public forum without even understanding the sense and essence of a message, it is more appropriate to first go through the thread and contents rather than jumping to conclusions on one's assumptions.
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Last edited by aminshah101; Sunday, March 12, 2017 at 07:27 PM.