Nasir Shah's outline does not address the inherent question of main topic
Inherent question is : How the "Concept" of Gender Equality is false/myth
What Question is addressed by Shah's outline is : What are the causes of gender discrimination in Pakistan"
Shah has used "series structure of argument" which is based on cause-impact-remedy structure in which every sub-claim is dependent on other sub claims. remedy depends on impact, impact depends on causes. I have used "convergent structure of argument" in which every sub claim contributes to the main Claim or Conflict. Both methods are widely used to furnish a strong arguments but it depends on the main claim that which method should be used.
Secondly it is not a good practice to satisfy oneself by writing an outline. Essay as a whole has so many dynamics that outline can never cover.