Quote:
Originally Posted by Zarrar Khan
Thanks for your feedback...PartyPooper
What would you propose "to address the core idea of the essay" ?
I would be glad to know your opinion on this topic. Waiting for your precious response...
|
The bit about not addressing the core idea was meant for Wazir. I think you have addressed it amply. The issue with your essay is that it is too philosophical and uses heavy jargon. That's the downside (perhaps the only downside, and maybe the decisive one, God forbid). I have heard professors saying that they penalise those who fail to keep essays general.