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Originally Posted by farooqkhan345
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1- i didnot find your outline in the post.
2- please improve your writing.
3- I just went through the introduction and conclusion part and it didnot seems proper to me. Work a bit hard on your sentence structure and expressions. Try to learn attractive essay writing.
This is just my opinion and any senior or expert over here is more than welcome for correction.
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