Originally Posted by The Elegent

It is said " Practice makes a man perfect " so no worries...
You could use word " recommend or referred" than advised because it is his friend not doctor...
secondly do not compress sentences unnecessarily as it will give an ugly look to your precis
Title of your precis is good
SUGGESTION
work on one word substitution
practise past papers
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