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Originally Posted by muneebhassan
Thanks for your reply brother.Can you mention some critical mistakes (except third person I forget probably).
And please suggest some tips to improve expression.
Thanks in anticipation.
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1. The State is unwilling to take counter-extremism measuers seriously.
2. On Tuesday, PMLN legislator introduced a bill in National Assembly Standing Committee on Defense which, argues that extremism related jurisdictions come under the Defense or Interior ministry.
3. After APS attack, state formed National action plan to uproot extremism from society, but its implementation is apathetic.*
To improve grammar, you can consult any good book on grammar. Once your grammar is strong, you will not need people like me to point your mistakes; you will do it yourself. Keep on practicing. Review your work and rewrite again.