Thread: My first outline on "Water Crisis and National Unity"
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It's a very good first attempt.
I think you should keep your essay as relevant as possible. You should discuss the effects in more detail as the essay is about "Water Crisis & National Unity".Also, keep the causes section brief. The rest, in my worm's eye view, is okay.
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