Thread: Seniors specially CSPs plz check my essay attempt. As I have not joined any academy.
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Old Tuesday, October 17, 2017
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Originally Posted by Codename Hijazi View Post
It's a Good attempt, still much can be added. But a good effort
What else should be added? Plz elaborate
As I want to make it more better.
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