Raja Bahar, dear I made two mistakes in letter to editorial, please do let me know whether they will deduct my marks or not. I started my letter like this. Please have a look at this, let me see if you detect the mistake.


....................................... Address: GGHS Sukkur, Hall 5,
........................................Date: 5-12-2017
To,

The Editor of an English Daily
Newspaper XYZ

Dear Sir,

with due respet it is submitted that I want to inform you about the deteriorating condition of education through your esteeemed Daily Englsih newspaper XYZ that......................(mentioned content all the deterioatitng condition of education system in Pak, illiteracy ration in Pak as compare to Srilanka, Bangladesh & India, CSS passing ration getting worse day by day, no quality of education etc,)...

Thus, I am hoping that through your esteemed newspaper, the concerned authority would take initiations in kicking off the the measures and redressing the educational policy etc.

I am confident that that your honour will look into my genuine request in a realistic perspective, ensuring that my request is accesed to at your hinour's earliest request.

Yours Obediently
XYZ