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Originally Posted by SYusraZRizvi
Plz evaluate this outline, on the said topic:
1.Introduction
- Colonialism -A curse for world
- Looting wealth of nations
2. Resources management in Pakistan
- Management of natural resources.
- Spree of opportunities for foreigners.
3. Resentments of local population
- Shrinking job market
- Never ending braindrain
- Low market productivity
4. Aptitute of Masses
- Prioritizing imported commodities
- Losses of local market
5.Suggestions to overcome hazards of colonialism
- Responsilities of state
- Efforts to address public grievances
6. Tasks at the end of U.N
- More exposure to a common citizen.
- Prevention of human rights violation.
7. Essential role of WTO
- Formulation of legal frame work
- Maximizing profit for host state.
-Conclusion.
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What and where is your thesis statement ?
Bro from the outline it seems that you are not arguing any point of view .
Essay is argumentative ,You have to show in your outline what point you want to argue and prove.
Points are relevant but you have to shape these points into arguments .
Boy ,consult regularly a competent English teacher and write at least 10 argumentative essays before exam if possible .(I wish someone had told me this before )
Regards .