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Originally Posted by SYusraZRizvi
Plz evaluate this outline, on the said topic:
1.Introduction
- Colonialism -A curse for world
- Looting wealth of nations
2. Resources management in Pakistan
- Management of natural resources.
- Spree of opportunities for foreigners.
3. Resentments of local population
- Shrinking job market
- Never ending braindrain
- Low market productivity
4. Aptitute of Masses
- Prioritizing imported commodities
- Losses of local market
5.Suggestions to overcome hazards of colonialism
- Responsilities of state
- Efforts to address public grievances
6. Tasks at the end of U.N
- More exposure to a common citizen.
- Prevention of human rights violation.
7. Essential role of WTO
- Formulation of legal frame work
- Maximizing profit for host state.
-Conclusion.
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Not a good attempt. No thesis statement. No clarity of ideas. It is not coherent. Random ideas. No particular type of essay is followed by you. Either go with argumentative style or go with cause effect remedy style. Choose the best style for your essay. Or go with the style you can tackle best.