I don't know that it is the exact statement of question you posted here. But one thing is very clear that he (dr. Iqbal) gave his idea in Aala abad session in 1930. You proved this statement with general historical facts. That are very acceptable but missed the contextual facts that culminated at his address. If you mentioned little about the activities regarding constitutional reforms and the Congress approach and view point specifically Nehru report and rejection of Quaid's 14 points in response to the report that would provide more solid grounds. Nevertheless, your attempt is not bad .

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