Mr. Siddiqui has well evaluated this essay outline of yours... By the way, in how much time you have developed the whole stuff of the outline?? Because as far as I see, even a subject matter expert might take 25 to 35 minutes to develop such a lengthy, detailed, overstated and repeated outline... Even if you eventually becomes successful in the exam to actually develop such an outline, I am sure, you are not going to make it to conclude it.