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There is absolutely no issue with your style of attempting essay.You can steer and manoeuvre the essay according to your convenience.
However,there is caveat to that Css essay is written in a fixed format,and it must be adopted by every css essay writer;for instance there should be outlines and three bodied structure of essay(Intro,main body,conclusion).

Moreover,essay must have three properties of unity,coherence,and logical sequencing.It must have one pivot(thesis statement and your vivid stance)around which your arguments revolve.

Lastly,Essay should be flawless,legible,and well-analysed.

the more you write,the more you will be closer to that css benchmark of appropriateness.

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