please check my outlines and guide me.i m just started my preparations for css.i know my outlines are not best but plz tell me where i m doing mistake?

Outlines;
Introduction
What is education?
Why education is so important?
Importance of education in Islam.
What is higher education?
Countries with well developed education systems.
Finland educational system.
Countries with poor educational system.
Nigeria's educational system.
Educational system of Pakistan.
(a)rank 50 in higher education by Qs ranking.
(b)No Pakistani university in top 500 by Times ranking.
(c)Neglected section since inception.
Importance of education in constitution of Pakistan.
Higher education commission of Pakistan.
Literacy rate of Pakistan.
Provincial education sector analysis.
Illetracy rate of Pakistan.
Low funds on educational sector.
Pakistan's crumbling education system.
(a)insufficiency of good governance.
(b)low quality of education.
(c)shortage of qualified faculty.
(d)small part of fund allocated on education sector.
(e)large number of students are out of universities.
(f)child labour.
(g)selection on the basis of commendation.
(h)less no of seats for student in medical colleges.
(i)main root cause is poverty.
(j)less number of scholarships.
(k)no focus on innovation and ideas generation.
(l)lack of research oriented culture.
(m)huge gaps between the standard of education b/w public and private universities.
To cure these problems there is dire need of good governance.
Large portion of funds for education sector.
Well-trained and high qualified faculty should be provided to students.
More number of universities should be formed.
Child labour should be prohibited.
Increased public funding for universities.
Provisions of scholarship through a competitive process.
Updation of process with modern day requirements.
Conclusion.