@ sadiqkhattak
good attempt, keep it up!
and I also agree with Last Island's pint of keeping precis in a single paragraph.
@ Chauhdary12,
nice attempt but need to review the title, as focal point of the passage was not the structure of organisations but "Organisational objectives and their pursuit". Sentences like
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Modern technology has replaced the older structure of organization where decion-making was in one hand, while the newer one involves a chain of decison makers in this process
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can be made more concise. Pithy and sententious expressions are the beauty of a precis. Practice can make this strenuous task achievable.