1. Why it was significant for both congress and league? Give the clear point in a same sentence.
2. Why were the British behaving to be idols as if they don't care about the continent? Simply what makes the pact successful?
3. It would rather be better to mention the gains to the league and congress separately.
4. The way to write introduction still needs to be polished.
5. Few grammar mistakes are also there.



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