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Outline
1: Introduction
2: Thesis Statement: The education shapes the destiny of the nation because it helps economic uplifting, get out of moral crisis and make informed decision in life.
3: How does the education shape the destiny of a nation?
a. Helps make informed decision
b. Provides with the skills
c. Moral Uplifting
d. Less crimes with the higher literacy rate, e.g Scandinavian Countries
e. provides with the means to earn livelihood
4: How can illiteracy have devastating effect on nations?
a. Terrorism and crime : Soviet Invasion of Afghanistan and illiterate people
b. Low living standards of people: Developing states
5:Scenario of our country
6: Way Forward
7:Conclusion