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It was not from want of perceiving the beauty of external nature but from the different way of perceiving it, that the early Greeks did not turn their genius to portray, either in color or in poetry, the outlines, the hues, and contrasts of all fair valley, and hold cliffs, and golden moons, and rosy lawns which their beautiful country affords in lavish abundance.

Primitive people never so far as I know, enjoy when is called the picturesque in nature, wild forests, beetling cliffs, reaches of Alpine snow are with them great hindrances to human intercourse, and difficulties in the way of agriculture. They are furthermore the homes of the enemies of mankind, of the eagle, the wolf, or the tiger, and are most dangerous in times of earthquake or tempest. Hence the grand and striking features of nature are at first looked upon with fear and dislike. I do not suppose that Greeks different in the respect from other people, except that the frequent occurrence of mountains and forests made agriculture peculiarly difficult and intercourse scanty, thus increasing their dislike for the apparently reckless waste in nature. We have even in Homer a similar feeling as regards the sea, --- the sea that proved the source of all their wealth and the condition of most of their greatness. Before they had learned all this, they called it “the Unvintagable Sea” and looked upon its shore as merely so much waste land. We can, therefore, easily understand, how in the first beginning of Greek art, the representation of wild landscape would find no place, whereas, fruitful fields did not suggest themselves as more than the ordinary background. Art in those days was struggling with material nature to which it felt a certain antagonism.

There was nothing in the social circumstances of the Greeks to produce any revolution in this attitude during their greatest days. The Greek republics were small towns where the pressure of the city life was not felt. But as soon as the days of the Greeks republics were over, the men began to congregate for imperial purposes into Antioch, or Alexandria, or lastly into Rome, than we seek the effect of noise and dust and smoke and turmoil breaking out into the natural longing for rural rest and retirement so that from Alexander’s day …… We find all kinds of authors --- epic poets, lyricist, novelists and preachers --- agreeing in the precise of nature, its rich colors, and its varied sounds. Mohaffy: Rambles in Greece.

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The Greek Perception of the Nature and Their Art

The early Greeks had different perception regarding the beauty of nature. Therefore, it found no place in the early days of Greek art. The Greeks, similar to ancient people viewed nature as a resistance to the human and agricultural progress as well. They had regarded the wild landscapes of nature as foes of human beings. The fact came from the writing of homer who viewed sea as a waste of land. Moreover, the Greeks in the victorious days provided no change in their stance about the nature, because they led a life of rural setting with smaller towns. But, later, when their victorious days came to an end, the imperial life shadowed their former life. Thus, the beauty of nature found its place in the later days of the Greek art.
I have read you precis. It is wonderful. According to my perception their are some issues in your precis.
Your precis is not in general. You have quoted some same elements of the paragraph. You need to talk in general while writing. Like you quoted "agricultural" and "agricultural landscape" etc. You don't need to quote them. Just write in general.

Title: The evolution of Greek natural Art.
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The ancient Greek did not give an importance to natural beauty of their country. Ancient people disliked the natural phenomena and occurrences and regarded them as disastrous to their existence. The Greek like other ancient people,also disliked natural art and did not take advantages of it. Homer had similar reaction to nature as they considered sea as a source of possible dangers before getting advantage of wealth of sea. At that time natural art of Greek was struggling. In these days there was no social interaction among the Greek. When their early days ended then social change commenced by the imperialism this can be noted by Greek authors in their writings[110 words]

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