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Originally Posted by Saba Arif
Precis writing group. Post your precis and take part in precis writing.
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Originally Posted by Saba Arif
TITLE: Humans and Machines
Science has given knowledge and capabilities to humans but they do not know how to use them properly. Humans have become very dependent on machine for daily routine work and they are using machines for various purposes. Frequent use of machines has made machines master of humans and humans their servants. But Machine requires proper maintenance and get fed up. Without proper maintenance they can be disastrous to humans. [69 words]
Please suggest me correction or improvement if any.
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Its good but lemme point out somethings i felt:
> the topic is about relationship of machines with humans. so there is not point to talk about
"Science has given knowledge and capabilities to humans but they do not know how to use them properly." (Irrelevant)
> Use past tense. avoid present tense. (skim DOs and DONTs of precis)
>Keep it up. your doing good.
P.S. Criticism is welcomed