Thankyou very much for the critical feedback
the intro does appear hazy, agreed.
It appears I'm weak in comprehending the topic and expanding thereon. Will have to look up some 'ways of brainstorming' lectures.
Do suggest any tips if you have em ready at hand!
Thanks again
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