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brother i pray for ur wel being nd prosperity

well, though i dont know much about essay but after reading between the lines i can say that u made a good try

keep it up

nonetheless, the room for improvement is there. the benefit of writing an essay on computer is : one can see the grammatical as well as spelling mistakes; and one can improve it easily by chaning positions of words without rewritting it on paper.

furhter, one should make outline of any essay before hand, however, let me try for making outline of this essay :

- introduction
- knolewdge in historical times
- explosion of every thing in modern era including knowledge
- benefits of knowledge explosion
- drawbacks of knowledge explosion
- conlusion

tke care

the more professionals can add/remove from above to make a good outline of essay on the said subject.

regards

Allah hafiz

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