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Old Thursday, October 10, 2019
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Originally Posted by Raz View Post
From your introduction, it appears that role of youth has been opposite to the topic i.e. instead of curtailing extremism, youth have promoted it or become part of it. Quoted examples, prove that extremist tendencies are increasing among young generation. If you want to take an stance that young generation has been instrumental in curtailing extremism, you must start with positive examples contrary to your aforementioned examples.
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