Reading the posts published by the aspirants reflect that their command on the English language has considerably improved. In the essay paper, it is not the expression and the intellectual capacity now but the parochial approach--either deliberately or foolishly--adopted by the FPSC that utterly discourage aspirants from speaking their minds, and fail them so brazenly. Please, don't feel disappointed at your performance because you would not have failed the exam; rather, they would have failed you. You may read this:
https://www.dawn.com/news/1326137