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One of the most ominous and discreditable symptoms of the want of candour in present-day sociology is the deliberate neglect of the population question. It is or should be transparently clear that if the State is resolved, on humanitarian grounds, to inhibit the operation of natural selection, some rational regulation of population, both as regards quantity and quality, is
imperatively necessary. There is no self-acting adjustment, apart from starvation, of numbers to the means of subsistence. If all natural checks are removed, a population in advance of the optimum number will be produced, and maintained at the cost of a reduction in the standard of living. When this pressure begins to be felt, that section of the population which is capable of reflection, and which has a standard of living which may be lost, will voluntarily restrict its numbers, even to the point of failing to replace deaths by an equivalent number of new births; while the underworld, which always exists in every civilised society the failures and misfits and derelicts, moral and physical will exercise no restraint, and will be a constantly increasing drain upon the national resources. The population will thus be recruited, in a very undue proportion, by those strata of society which do not possess the qualities of useful citizens.

The importance of the problem would seem to be sufficiently obvious. But politicians know that the subject is unpopular. The unborn have no votes. Employers like a surplus of labour, which can be drawn upon when trade is good. Militarists want as much food for powder as they can get. Revolutionists instinctively oppose any real remedy for social evils; they know that every unwanted child is a potential insurgent. All three can appeal to a quasi-religious prejudice, resting apparently on the ancient theory of natural rights, which were supposed to include the right of unlimited procreation. This objection is now chiefly urged by celibate or childless priests; but it is held with such fanatical vehemence that the fear of losing the votes which they control is a welcome excuse for the baser sort of politician to shelve the subject as inopportune. The Socialist calculation is probably erroneous; for experience has shown that it is aspiration, not desperation, that makes revolutions.


Title: Negligence of population problem

The problem of population faced negligence. However, a logical regulation of population was required, if the state was to resolve the problem. Because when natural regulations were effaced, population grew that not only lowered the lifestyle of the section of the population, which felt its pressure, but also reduced natural resources. Moreover, the problem of population remained significant. But, it received no ears from political leaders, due to the unpopularity of the issue and their fear of giving up vote bank. Thus, the issue remained sidelined. (words: 86)

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Dear, yor precis is finer than mine(given beow) but our word count are not up to the requirement of the passage. To me, this sort of passage can be written in both present and past forms. Well, you can give your own opinion about my write-up
Title: Ignoring population growth
The subject of population growth has failed to draw attention and is being intentionally overlooked by society. Especially, religious clerics, politicians and others consider the problem pointless and absurd for some obvious reasons. They consider every step to control and manage human population as an obstacle to their vested interests. This sort of approach has, in turn, severely hampered individuals’ progress. Burgeoning population is a matter of serious concern and if left unchecked and some logical measures are not taken, it will risk socio-economic development of human beings and make their life vulnerable.
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