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Originally Posted by The dream of rain View Post
Kindly, first, mention the topic at top clearly so that members can what you're going to outline.
secondly, mention sub-points of headings, here for example under "major problems of education, role of teachers" and so on... require sub headings.
Thirdly, make it more appealing by using Bold, numbers and alphabets.
Post again under the same thread by making above changes.
Hope it helps!
First of all thank you so much for your response, Secondly i think that 3 essays are enough to cover the essay paper of pms those are Education,Economy of pakistan or socio economic and foreign policy.
i am gaining content of education essay so that i can cover dimensional points of education system in pakistan.
Third, that is my first outline i have ever written or try to write, i do not know the rules of essay properly please guide ?
4TH = i am making another outline about education please check it, i shall be very thankful to you.
Topic = Education plays a vital role in society prove.

1 = Education is obligatory on every Muslim :
#1=Islamic society Education
#2=modern society education
#3=islamic edu vs modern edu
2 = social impacts of education :
#1=making a conscientious society
(Respect of elders should be taught)(lenity for youngsters)
#2=development of a country
(Basic economic education to all)(Freedom for economist)
#3=employment after education
(High school level should taught about career paths)etc.
3 = co - education
#1=advantages and disadvantages
(mixing of gender)(Un-confidence)(group study)
#2=character development with co-education ?
(Self Respect don't build)(Respect of women ends)
#3=Islamic point of view about co-education
(mixing of gender is prohibited)(Should follow ancient islamic Education)
4 = conclusion :
#1= improvement in social studies
(social studies must have content of modern society)
#2=basic knowledge of society must be compulsory
(human rights, basic law knowledge, Rights awareness)
Please check it and note down each and every mistake you have observed and criticize it. i spend 30 to 40 minuets on it.
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