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In the male dominated society of Pakistan, gender inequality is rampant with women being marginalized in almost every sphere of personal and professional lives. (Clear stance in the opening sentence). Typical uneducated families only consider male child as the bread earners and therefore, pay little or no attention to the education and schooling of the female. According to World Bank statistics, female literacy rate in Pakistan stands at 45% as compared to 69% of that of male. (Support of stance with data and logic).

Can you please rewrite entire paragraph in this format (Title Sentence and then support of stance with data, logic and reason. Ending sentence must summarize the findings of para)
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