Originally Posted by Nida Rizvi

Thank you. As you have claimed that you have scored 70 in the essay paper, I must request you let me see your marks sheet, please. Because your reply has many grammatical and structural mistakes, I wonder how you managed to score 70 in the essay. I have mentioned a couple of mistakes that I found in just 4 sentences. If you had scored 70 with these many mistakes, FPSC could have awarded me more than 90.

You are absolutely right (When something is "right", there is no need to say absolutely right.) Academies are a waste of time. They use a "one size fits all" formula for each and every student. (kindly, use either "each" or "every", as using both each and every is a redundancy error.) Academies are in place to make money off (make off is a phrasal verb that means to leave a place quickly) aspirant's ignorance and utter desperation. The sooner aspirants learn that CSS is an individualistic (It is a wrong selection of the word, kindly, write individual) journey, the more chances they will have of properly utilizing their time and efforts.