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Originally Posted by Silvia Rose
Here is my essay outline for the topic "How far can digitalization help in socioeconomic development in Pakistan?". Dear seniors at CSS Forum, kindly point out the mistakes. Thanks!
A) Introduction
Thesis Statement:
Although there are many factors to which socioeconomic development can be attributed, however, digitalization can play a pivotal role in socioeconomic development in Pakistan.
B) What is meant by digitalization?
i) Definition and basic elements
ii)Difference between digitalization and digitization
iii) Status of digitalization in Pakistan
C) How far can digitalization help in socioeconomic development in Pakistan?
i) As a driver of economic growth and development
ii) Improved quality of education through the deployment of latest technologies
iii) A better healthcare monitoring and control system
iv) Promotion of tourism industry through the use of digital technologies
v) The implementation of E-democracy
vi) Bridging the digital divide through the development of digital infrastructure
vii) The development of digital competency among organizations
viii) The implementation of digital workplace concept
ix) As a source of ecological and environmental protection
x) As a source of employment
D) What are other factors to which socioeconomic development can be attributed?
i) Fair distribution of resources among the citizens
ii) "The lower the population, the higher the development"
iii) The current status of economy within a country
iv) The nature of institutions within the country
E) What can be done to promote digitalization in Pakistan?
i) Increased investment by the government in the digital sector
ii) The access of proper digital training to all citizens
iii) Incentives for using technology to reach certain milestones
F) Conclusion
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Dear, you need to omit some irrelevant facts like:
)Difference between digitalization and digitization
iii) Status of digitalization in Pakistan
Make separate heading for
Status of digitalization in Pakistan, which is a main topic.
drop this:
D) What are other factors to which socioeconomic development can be attributed?
you are diverting from the topic theme; no need of it in my opinion
some other suggestions:
do not use
the article in outline. Also, follow present structure do not use
improved as far as this topic is concerned.
Plus: drop out first sentence of your thesis statement; state directly what the topic is. I hope you understand.