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Coronavirus and Pakistan
Outline
Thesis Statement: The outbreak of Coronavirus (Covid-19) has affected all the countries around the world, and Pakistan is also greatly affected by the pandemic, in terms of economic, social and health related issues.
1) Introduction
i) Overview of Coronavirus
ii) First case in China
iii) How it affects
iv) Symptoms of the disease
v) Development of the vaccine
2) Global impact of Covid
i) Economic impacts
ii) Social impacts
iii) Health-related impacts
3) Impact of COVID-19 on Pakistan
i) Social impacts of Coronavirus
ii) Economic Impacts of Coronavirus
iii) Health-related issues
4) Recommendations to overcome the disastrous impacts of Coronavirus
i) Following strict SOPs
ii) Increasing awareness regarding the disease
iii) More and More tests
iv) Adopt innovative practices to avoid Coronavirus
v) Ignoring the false news regarding the virus
5) Conclusion

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