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Originally Posted by Realistically
Good thesis statement
Decent attempt.
You could have talked about the need about spearding awareness of water conservation i.e incorporation of its importance in curriculum etc. Role of media.
You are safe in essay as for as I am concerned.
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Thank you. I talked about it in 6.3 heading about sharing awareness at homes, but didn't mention role of media or through curricula. Fingers crossed