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1*) Introduction (100words)

1) What does the quotation "Sometimes we donot see what we see" mean?
2) Thesis Statement


2*) What are the aspects that prevent us from glancing the truth i.e in front of our eyes? (500 words)

1) Fear of facing the music
2) Lack of power to destroy the root of an issue
3) No prove found against the culprits
4) Lack of honesty amongst people
5) Relations prioritized over justice


3*) What are the problems that take place in Pakistan due to the ignorance of what we see? (500 words)

1) Fall in plantation due to shortage of water
2) Increase in child labour due to poverty
3) Rise in corruption because of unjust workers
4) Loss of lives i.e inversely related to inflation
5) Increase in crimes due to various reasons


4*) What are the reasons due to which Pakistan locals don't prefer seeing what they see? (500 words)

1) Lack of finance to work on the cause
2) Lack of skilled labour to work
3) Lack of honest and powerful government
4)Arising of external issues by working on causes
5) Lack of care and attention towards the truth


5*) What can be done as a way to make Pakistan and other countries see what they don't prefer seeing? (500 words)

1) Strict laws for the supporters of culprits
2) Monitoring of workers regarding their work and budgets
3) Use of media to create awareness
4) Ban on overusing some products
5) Providing education for free to help people learn

6*) Conclusion (100 words)