First, sorry that I assumed you brother you may be sister. Anyhow a considerate sister is more dear to me than an indifferent brother
Second, I do not believe in 'experts' for my past experience of experts is, unfortunately not so good. At times experts prove so hallow that my weakness in English seems nothing as compared to their shallow approach towards language. Also, I am a little bit shy about sharing my writings with anyone thats why I am taking the help of internet. I do believe that an open criticism from many people is more beneficial in correcting one's language than the opinion of a single expert. Anyhow thx again for sparing time for my poor piece of writing.
I would wait for your valuable criticism on my other posts.