Dear Preshan
Ur essay covering diefferent aspects of religious diefferences deeply impressed me. I wud like to see more from u on this important aspect of human life i.e., religion. but ur essay lacks one thing. It does not explain the topic it started. Moreover, u wrongly quoted Jean De La Fontaine who said ''religious contentions r devil's harvest' by which he means that satan is the real source of all schism in religion. I couldn't find word ''Satan's heaven'' in his writing. over all ur essay is good. hope u will not mind my criticism.
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