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seen a large number of people leaving such noble professions as medical and engineering and joining civil service. With what aims??
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after the word civil service you shouldn't use full stop rather you should connect the word (with) to civil service by removing full stop and writing (with) in small letter.
Correct: seen a large number of people leaving such noble professions as medical and engineering and joining civil service with what aims??
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power and this point gets weightage when we see that
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It should be weight age . I mean with space.
Correct : power and this point gets weight age when we see that
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So most of the big-bang claims of serving the motherland are actually an eyewash to hide the real intention of ruling the poor masses in the garb of bureaucracy.
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an eyewash is wrong. It should be simply eyewash.
This sentence structure does not reflect inner meaning which you actually want so convey and the grammatical structure of this sentence is wrong.
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According to me, this sentence should be in this order :
So most of the big bang, to hide their real intentions of ruling the poor masses in the garb of bureaucracy, claims of serving the motherland, which is actually eyewash.