Thank you for overseeing the expansion and for the feedback. One thing I would like to ask you is that is it okay to begin introduction part of the expansion with the conventional sentences like; This proverb means...or something like that? I read it in Exploring the World of English that such conventional beginning should be avoided, but I found it quite challenging to begin with something else. Or please let me know from what kind of sentences should we begin intro, ofcourse not specificially but in general. In above attempts of expansions, I have strictly followed the structure you mentioned, but the main problem I faced was due to not finding suitable sentences for introduction, as I felt compelled not to use the conventional ones...
Oops quite a long question Hope you dont mind