@ theelegant444,
Your essay seems to be "Challenges of Good Governance FACED BY PAKISTAN".
It is true , when u r talking about Good Governance, it would be related to Pakistan. BUT it is not mentioned here to write only about Pakistan.
So if u add only a 10% of ur essay in a global scenario, it would be more productive.
I will write the same essay by ADDING following things
1. Nature of Governance challenges in the world history(As IR was my optional subject) and its Evolution
2. Challenges faced by US in the past (US-History was also my optional subject)
3. Challenges faced by globe especially USA in current scenario like terrorism, economic recession etc….
4. And the rest of 70% about Pakistan current issues.
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