Tuesday, August 11, 2009
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37th Common
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Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: lahore
Posts: 2
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hello omar,how r u?
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Originally Posted by Omer
(Words: 317)
Precise
Humans have been suffering from problems of various kinds since time immemorial. Earlier, they found difficulty in surviving with the environment. Nature also gave some benefits to humans but kept its superiority over them. However, by using their wisdom, humans are able to cope with the environmental problems. But humans are not using their wisdom for their very benefit and still inflicting harm to each other to prove their authority over others. This led to many problems and fear of these problems is still present in modern age.
(Words: 88)
I have used very very simple language. Is it fine or some tough words should be used?
Please comment on the precise.
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omar i have read ur preci.its a good attempt but not upto the mark.
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