Dear you are well aware about my status (I am also candidate like you in this attempt and we do have some common facts too). So I can’t pass comments with confidence on your given title. What can I do is to suggest you same thing which I liked for myself. That is “Perception of Art - in the eyes of various Artists”. This was the title I assigned to it in the paper. One can’t express opinion with certainty before the result is out. Even then we can compare some samples to draw a conclusion. And the same exercise has been carried out in the following thread of which you were also an active participant.
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-past-...-precis-2.html

Even then you have floated this question again which is an evidence of the stress level which you are experiencing in these days. Don’t take tension brother, we all are in the same queue and we should do our best n leave the rest.

One tip: I always strive to assign a broader and all encompassive title to the précis in my paper. This trick saves me from complete failure and to a great extent I have been successful in this strategy. I applied same methodology in this paper. Let’s see what are the results.


Though your title is not totally irrelevant but one main thing is missing which in my opinion is the essence of this passage i.e. “Art”. Had “art” been covered in your title I would have great comfort to keep it on safe side.


God bless you brother.


Regards

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