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1: It is quite clear to everybody that large number of taxis lorries,vans,buses,and private cars use Queen's road everyday and one often sees motorcycles and bicycles trying to sqeeze through dense traffic.

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on queen's road two wheeler passes through dense traffic of vehicles.
what vl be the theme of this topic according to you guys?

2: LACK OF CARE PARTICULARLY on the part of drivers of vehicles is probably the major cause of traffic accidents, although pedestrians are sometimes to blame.This carelessness can take many forms.A driver may be chatting with a companion . He may be watching somebody in another vehicle.He may be thinking about some trouble at work or at home. he may be smooking and trying to find ashtray. whatever the reason may be there is no excuse for many of the accidents which occur.

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Mostly drivers are to blame for accidents as compare to pedestrian because of their lack of attention, which can lead to disastreous accidents.whatever the reason may be there is no excuse for the accidents.
THEME: CAUSES OF ACCIDENTS.

4: Nature has provided each livingthing with its own means of defence. sometimes this is obvious to anybody. cats can climb trees to escape from dogs A lizard can freeze in the grass when chased by a inquisitive dogs. It can shed patrs of its tail if necessary thereby distracting an enemy. birds can fly away. frogs can jump in to water and hide in the mud at the bottom of a pool.each creature has its own way of staying alive.


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