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salam.

Note the following.

1 the purpose of correction is to 'correct the sentense'. That a sentense can be corrected by changing its preposition, and not by changing the verb is mind-boggling.

2 (On leave)

The mere usage by laymen would'nt rectify an error. If you find this in any authintic word-store, do tell me. that would be a favour. Something non-existant in dictionery cannot be recommended.

3 (pity)

The mith that a sentense can only be rectified in "One" way is recommended to be abandoned. Infact there are many ways.

4 (ill since)

the construction is ..Sub...has/have been ....verb.....Object"

if any dictionery suggests that 'ill' is a verb, do tell me.
(that it is used is a truth. But equally incorrect)

5 (charged with)

Your correction is correct too. i believe in many possible solutions.

6 (Since in present)

No problem with that. it is usually used.

Pakistan has been making great progress.......etc

Quote:
12 he saw the patient who was long ill
(tense structure)
he saw the patient who has been ailing since long.
(My darling mohiuddin has changed the tense)
Are you sure u saw the "Flash of Changing tense"

the tense has not changed. it is still past. the second part is 'dependent sentense. it cannot change the tense. it can merely add to the meaning of first clause'

Quote:
13 until you rein idle, you will make no progress
(until..n/pn..do/does not...assertion)

Until you dont rein idleness, you will make no progress
this was my BLUNDER. you did not notice it. i wanted to edit it yesterday. But thanx to your kindness, i did not get anything of what you promised, so i had to contact authorities...!!!

Until is negative itself.

correction is

Until you rein idleness, you will make no progress.
(meaning jab idleness control kar loge TABB progress karoge...pehle nahin)

Continue the good work

Allah Nigeh Ban
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